Poetical Exercise

Based on Neruda translated by Bly

Eras la boina gris y el corazon en calma.
You were a gray beret and the whole being at peace.

Eras:
la: the, her, it.
boina: flat, round woollen cap generally worn in Navarre and Biscay.
gris: gray, minever, Siberian squirrel and its fur; cold, sharp air or weather
y: and
el: the, he
corazon: heart, core, pith, love benevolence, affection, spirit, courage, will, mind, middle or centre of anything, in a loom, cam
en: in, at, on, upon
calma:
You:
were: exist, (synonyms: abide, continue, hold, live, act, do, inhabit, move, breathe, endure, last, obtain, persist, prevail, remain), (antonyms: cease, go, quit, depart, halt, refuse, die, idle, reject, discontinue, leave, stop, forsake, lose, give up, pass)
a:
gray: silver, (synonyms: drab, ash, heather, oyster, dusty, clouded, iron, pearly, grey, dappled, lead, powder, silvery, Dove, neutral, shaded)
beret: small hat, (synonyms: beanie, DINK, pillbox, tam, bonnet, fez, skullcap, tam o’shanter)
and: in addition to, plus, (synonyms: along with, as a consequence, as well as, furthermore, also, including)
the:
whole: entire, complete, (synonyms: full, exclusive, unabridged, concentrated, perfect, gross, accomplished, conclusive, aggregate, integral, choate, consummate, all, total, completed, every), (antonyms: incomplete, deficient, insufficient, part, fractional, sick, partial, hurt, unhealthy, unfinished, impaired, broken, imperfect)
being: existence, (synonyms: actuality, animation, journey, life), (antonyms: abstract, inanimate, deadness)
at: about, in the direction of, (synonyms: appearing in, by, found in, in the vicinity of)
peace: harmony, agreement, (synonyms: accord, love, truce, amity, friendship, reconciliation, unity, armistice), (antonyms: disagreement, agitation, frustration, hate, disharmony, upset, hatred, distress, war, discord, fighting, worry)

Possible Take aways:
The woolen cap and cold Siberian squirrel central to the spirit.
Unity in the direction of life completed as a consequence of tam o’shanter clouded breath.
Upon middle he and sharp air flat it.

You do not quit shaded including the un-broken anti-abstract in the vicinity of non-discord.
You do not quit shaded into the un-broken anti-abstract in the vicinity of non-discord.
You will not quit shaded into the un-broken anti-abstract in the vicinity of non-discord.
You will not quit shaded into the un-broken abstraction in the vicinity of non-discord.
You will not quit shaded into the un-broken vicinity of discord-free abstraction.
You will not break the discord-free abstraction.
You are the discord-free abstraction.
You are the abstraction.
Abstraction.

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